Have you ever been treated like you're an alien? If you haven't, well good for you. You are completely different from Harry Potter, since he has been treated like this more than once. In Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, you will live through a million emotions and situations.
Have you ever realized that Harry Potter and Sirius Black are similar to a great celebrity? A man who changed history and many people's life? A man that, just recently, died? Well this man was called Nelson Mandela. Sirius, Harry and Nelson were all treated like they were dangerous criminals, even though they fought for peace. Each a different type, yes, but still peace. I wonder if Miss Rowling knew about this, but I certainly think it.
Now, have you ever felt imprisoned from everything you like? Well that's what Sirius and Harry have been going through. Harry, kept away from the magic world and his dead parents, and once more Sirius, from the outdoors. Personally, I have. When I changed school, I felt like my other friends had been taken away. But then, I realized it was for the best, like for Harry and Sirius.
Once more, have you ever been stressed? Have you ever felt afraid? In the Order of the Phoenix, when Harry prepares himself for his hearing, he feels both. Afraid of not coming back to Hogwarts, afraid of the Ministry of Magic. He also feels stressed, and again for the same reasons as fear.
Did Harry do the right thing to go to the Ministry to find Sirius?
Personally, I don't think it's a question of rights. Harry was sure one of his only family member was in danger, and he ran to his rescue. The problem is, he should have continued Occlumency with Snape. He could have blocked out the horrible dreams he was having, and not have tried to save Sirius, who was not in danger at the time. When he rushed to Sirius, he made everyone in danger. At the same time, he did the good thing. If he hadn't, the Death Eaters and Voldemort would've heard the Prophecy, and they would've killed him. I think that Harry did the right thing. Now he has destructed the Prophecy, and everyone now knows the truth: Voldemort is back and so are his Death Eaters. Although he did the right thing up to me, he did not wish for the death of Sirius.
In this fabulous book, I think I have found a very strong message. A message very inspiring. This message would be that even the wisest and strongest man make mistakes. In other words, no one is perfect. When Dumbledore speaks to Harry towards the end of the book, he says this. No one, even him, is perfect and makes on mistake. When Dumbledore was younger, he thought that his plan for Harry did not have one mistake. But it did.
Have you noticed that in this book, their is a lot of foreshadowing? When Dumbledore wants Harry to do Occlumency, he knew that one day if he didn't learn it fast enough it would cause problems. And so it did. It cost Sirius's life and put everyone in great danger.
Another remarkable thing is the dialogue. For once, I have been able to read the feeling. When, for example, Harry was mad at Hermione and Ron for not speaking to him about Number 12 Grimmauld Place, I could feel his rage through the words. I can't explain how, but I felt it. I knew how Harry felt just by the way it was written.
Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place. When I first read this address of one of the titles, I wondered where that was. Until I read further on, it was a mystery. But when I learned about it, it all became clear. I love the way that Miss Rowling wrote about a normal address, until further on, in a very normal way, while it's, in the book, a very magical place. She wrote about it as if it was an everyday house, but it really wasn't. I think we could call this contrast.
She turned red as Ron looked round at her with a defiant expression on his face. In this paragraph, I can imagine Hermione turning red while Ron, looking at her, has a defying look glued to his face.
She turned red as Ron looked round at her with a defiant expression on his face. In this paragraph, I love the way how Miss Rowling used descriptive words, and not something like: her face was red and Ron was mad looking at her. She used specific words and I love her elaborate vocabulary.
I hope you haven't had any connections to this book. Anyway, it's better for you if you haven't. Thanks for reading my response thoroughly, have a great time correcting it.
Jane-Hélène

































